Contest project, day twenty six: Warning, rambling ahead · 2:38am Feb 27th, 2015
Oh, carajo.
I finally f*cking finished the damn chapter. Here it is, it's over. This is it, my entry for my very first contest as a writer:
Now, here are some last words about the whole thing I want to say:
If you want to be a genius, it's easy: All you gotta say is, "Everything stinks." Then, you're never wrong. That's how much of a genius I am! That's how I got to where I am today!
Then, we got smart. We are not, will not, be the janitor of these starry-eyed amateurs.
World War I: There I was, up to my elbows in Nazis. Now, don't get me wrong: I'll eat just about anything, just so long as it's easy to swallow.
Now, to make a moving picture, ya gotta have two things: Pushers and shovers. Oh, we made mistakes, but I don't regret it, no sir.
Fortunately, everybody can't be a chief. The chief is not only the right-hand man, but also the left-hand man. He is the short man, he is the tall man! From one man to another, he is no man whatsoever! Ya got that, shorty?
Now get this: They either got it, or they don't got it. But gosh darn it, I can hold my water! Until the masses cry, "Cheat the plate!" And I say unto them;
"Let the doves free!"
Ten points to whoever can guess the reference.
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Congratulations! However, do you intend on making a series out of this?
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Thanks. I'm not sure. It was fun to develop the idea into a story, but being honest, I want to focus more on the other projects I have unfinished (I have five if I'm remembering well)
2834322 By the way, I am making a fic that has multiple Trixies from multiple universes coming together. Can Deadshot!Trixie come in as a cameo?
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I would be honored (if you need background, Show MUST Go On! should do).
2834384 For example I'm going to have a scene where the Trixies are going through the timeline and end up somewhere they don't want to be. For example, they stumble upon a Twixie universe and look disturbed. Then they stumble upon Equestria Daily...and get a major ego boost.
Then they stumble upon Deadshot!Trixie...
Loved the chapter! Loved the story. You really managed to take an impossible situation and turn it on its head. I see no problems with the storyline, characters, or general descriptions. I would suggest an editor, but your next blogpost says that you're already on it.
Story: 9.0
Characters: 8.5
Spelling and Grammer: working on it.
PS, love that he doesn't actually speak Ibex.
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Well, after loosing sleep, meals and sanity, it's good to know that it ended as a solid over-average fiction.
About Red Panzer, it was a nod to the comics. Four character have used the RP armor, but only one was actually German, so I decided to give a nod to it by making this Panzer a wannabe.