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  • 460 weeks
    IT BEGINS!

    THE NEW AGE OF PONY BALL HAS BEGUN!

    All comments on the original story have been deleted to remove all potential spoilers for new readers, and because many of them may become irrelevant with changes to various chapters to the story.

    Happy reading...

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  • 460 weeks
    Story Updates

    Hey guys, been a long time since I've posted anything, so just want to give you an update on progress. Then first chapter of Pony Ball Z is sitting at about 80% completion. It's one of the few that is getting a complete rewrite rather than just a little polish and touch up. It needed it since it was initially written while I had no idea what direction I was going to take the story at all. The

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  • 465 weeks
    Pony Ball Z Revision

    I'm honestly not sure if this tag is going to work. Dunno if favorites came back with the story when it was restored. Anyway...

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  • 466 weeks
    Time to Explain the Cryptic Message

    Alright guys. No more beating around the bush. Unless you like bush beating. In which case, carry on. Beat that bush like it's never been beaten before.

    As for me, I'm going to be very direct here: I'M TRYING TO BRING MY STORIES BACK

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Jul
6th
2012

8k+ Views Special!!!!! · 12:42pm Jul 6th, 2012

Okay, this is a WARNING to any new readers! If you have not read up to the most recent chapter of Pony Ball Z, DO NOT READ THIS!!!!!!!!!! I CAN NOT STRESS THAT ENOUGH!!! HUUUUUUUUUUUGE SPOILER ALERT! IF YOU HAVE NOT READ UP THE MOST RECENT CHAPTER OF PONY BALL Z! DO NOT FREAKING READ THIS!!!!!



Okay.... You get all that? If you haven't read it, DON'T READ BEYOND THIS POINT!!!! And any who do read this..... DON'T POST SPOILERS IN THE COMMENTS! I WILL HUNT YOU ALL DOWN AND TAKE EMBARRASSING PICTURES OF YOU WHILE YOU SLEEP! Okay.... now that we've gotten that out of the way..... You were warned!



I present to you..... PONY BALL GT: TWILIGHT'S DILEMMA



UNKNOWN LOCATION
IMMEDIATELY FOLLOWING THE BATTLE WITH STAR BINDER


Twilight Sparkle stirs from a deep sleep. "Ugh...", she groggily says as she tries to wake up. She places her hooves over her face and rubs her eyes while she yawns. She shifts her hooves to the sides of her head. "Oooh, my head... Way to start the day with a splitting headache....". She stands up and shakes her head a few times. "Hey Spike, are you already..... up....", her words taper off as she gets a good eye full of her surroundings.

Their is no sun. Their is no moon. The sky is pitch black. The ground beneath her is barren of any life. No light is shining from above, but she can see within a few yards of where she currently stands and in the far off distance. The ground has a faint red glow, and everything in the distance has the same glow. It's almost as if the ground itself is sentient, and illuminates the area of any creature standing on it.

"Where am I!?", she says in confusion. "What happened? How did I get here!?" After saying that, her mind suddenly snaps back. She begins to remember the events that transpired. She remembers that her brother is dead. She remembers watching Cadance be brutally murdered. And then... nothing. Nothing at all.... except Rarity screaming her name. After that, she saw a bright flash, and then nothing. She remembers nothing of how she got here.

"What.... WHERE IN THE WIDE WORLD OF EQUESTRIA AM I!?", she screams.

"You are in a place that exists beyond time and space.", a voice says behind her.

She quickly turns around to see a small hooded figure standing before her. It's shorter than she is, most of its' body is cloaked in a black robe. She can see the lower half of its' face; it has very pale skin, and single sharp tooth that slightly protrudes from its' top jaw.

"What are you, and where did you come from?", he asks her.

"I'm a unicorn pony from the land of Equestria.", she responds. "How did I get here?"

"The only way to get here is to open an inter-dimensional doorway to this place. Did you do such a thing?"

"I.... I don't know. All I can remember is a really powerfully unicorn was brutally murdering my friends and family. I blacked out for a moment, and then I heard a friend of mine scream my name. I woke up just in time to see the entire room filled with some kind of strange magic, I see a bright flash and then I blacked out again. The next time I came too, I was here.", she explains.

"Do you think that this other unicorn may have sent you here?", he asks.

"I don't really know, but I don't think so. Each unicorns' magical aura have their own unique color. His was green. The magic that filled the room was purple.... which is the same color as mine...."

"I see.... perhaps seeing such terrible things being done to your friends and family caused you to lose control of yourself, and you accidentally opened a gateway to this place."

"Do... do you think such a thing is possible?", she asks.

"I never thought it would be. I have the ability to willingly open the doorway to this world, but I thought myself to be the only one. For you to do it and not even realize it must mean you have an incredible fount of magical power."

"You can open the door to this place!? Can you please open it and send me home!?", she ecsatically asks.

"I'm sorry, but the door only opens one way. Once you're in, there is no way to get out. I am trapped here for that reason. I was fighting a battle and the situation grew... desperate... so I opened the doorway to this place, but was knocked inside in place of my enemies."

"That's terrible....", says Twilight. "How long have you been here?"

"I'm not sure. Time passes differently here. This dimensional space exists beyond the boundaries of all. Even if by some miracle you were to find a way out, you may not end up back where you started."

"I see....", Twilight says as her ears slump and she drops her head to look at the ground.

"Hmmm.... I think I have an idea.", the creature says. "I can willingly open the door from the outside, and you somehow opened it without ever realizing it. Perhaps if we work together we can find a way out of here."

Twilight perks up. "You think so?"

"I say it's worth a try. It's better than rotting in here isn't it?"

"You're right. We can't give up! Let's put our heads together, and I'm sure we can come up with something!"

"That's the spirit, unicorn!"

"Oh, tee hee." Twilight giggles. "I was lost in my own sadness for a moment that I forgot my manners. My name is Twilight Sparkle. What's yours?"

"My name.... is Garlic Junior......"

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Comments ( 22 )

And I suddenly realize I can't actually remove this... soooo. How wrong were you?

Well. Garlic junior can only mean bad things.

Oh, MY GOD! I thought she was in Hell, but someone said something else, and apparently I was wrong. Awesome chapter, btw.

215901YOUR DAMN RIGHT YOU WERE!:rainbowlaugh: WHOO, CALLED IT CALLED IT TOTALLY F**KING CALLED IT!!!:pinkiehappy::yay::rainbowlaugh:

So do I get a prize?

216115 Yeah. And ya know what? It's spelled B.O.M.B. Let me get it for- Really? Really? Now it's gonna-BOOM!!

216164:derpyderp2: :couph: Well, I guess set myself up for that one, :couph couph: but please, allow me to make amends for my actions with this gift call DYN-OH-MITE, it's a REEEEAAAAL blast.:pinkiehappy:

Keep your eyes on the birdy now. :ducks:... KABOOOOOM!!!

Ha, I knew it, she's in the Dead Zone. Again thank you for posting this. :pinkiehappy:

216164>>216218

Now you two play nice! Or You'll both C4 stars over your heads! (that was a bad one....)

216360 Indeed. You and only a few others called it. In all honesty I'm surprised I got any guesses OTHER than the Dead Zone. I mean, the portal was the same color, and I used the freaking dead zone theme! How does one not put that connection together!? Maybe it was too obvious.... I dunno.


Anyway, like I said. This wasn't going to be posted until after the main story was finished, So, welcome to the link between stories.

216490Now that you've brought up those facts... how DID you get guesses besides dead zone?:rainbowhuh:

216490 *Sees what TheWrestlingBrony said*
*thinks about it*
...Ohhhhhh, I get it now. That actually was pretty good.
216218 Actually, I blew myself up by accident. You just added to the chaos. Although to defeat me, you would have to play Justin Bieber's "Boyfriend" (Oh, great, did I just say that?)

217295Yes, yes you did. :reaches into hammer space: ...What? Pinkies not the only one who uses this thing you know. :Pulls out, you know whos CD: Let the defeating... begin MUHAHAHAHAHA!!! :http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=4GuqB1BQVr4:

219545 OH, MY EARS!!!!!!! OHHHHH!!!!
Alright, you win!! I'll do anything! Anything! Just please, turn it off!!

219849Anything you say? Hmmmmmm... >:)

220010 i wished I didn't say that.

222578Oh your about to alright, MUHAHAHAHAHAHAHA!!! :cue thunder and lightning:, :record scratch: Nah, I'm just fooling, just admit defeat and we'll call it a day, that's all I'm really after anyway.:pinkiehappy:

225764 Alright, I admit defeat. And I thought my SSj5 Goku avatar would help me out here. Well, have a good day. It was fun challenging you.

226421 Like-wise, till next time dude. (And for the record, you would've had a better chance with a SSJ4 avater.)

225764>>226421

Are you two finally finished!? I'm tired of being all excited over new notifications! How dare you both make me think people are paying attention to me!

226500 Sorry about that... Please don't send Vegeta to kill us!!! I'm too pretty to die! (yeah, I know I'm a man, but still...)

Twilight seems awfully happy after seeing her friends die and then teleporting herself into a dimension with no escape. Also, MOAR!!

226500 Sorry sorry, we're done now, made piece and all that stuff. So no need to try to kill us now. :pinkiehappy:

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