Story Review: Anthropology: Lyra's tale

This (at the moment incomplete) story is about why Lyra is so obsessed with humans. It is brilliantly written. The description in it forces the feeling into you (the reader). The character feels tired and groggy, you feel tired. Your character is thinking "WHAT THE BUCK?!" You're just as surprised. I haven't read or seen much with Vinyl Scratch in it, but in her scene, I was sure that she would act the way she did. It is a marvel, and a joy to read. I do have to point out the negative as well, and the only real negative is its small chapter count. But It's a great story anyways and if you need a quick read, go check it out.

-The Author