Jun
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2012
Damn revisions... · 1:18am Jun 28th, 2012
So I updated The Second Exile to include the "Dark" tag as well as Shining Armor as a character — I figure he's important enough to deserve it. The new tag was because after rereading some of the chapters, I realized how brusque I've been with the descriptions of Nocturne and his assorted dreamland escapades. I don't think it warrants a change to Mature just yet because I've been purposefully avoiding being as descriptive as I could be, but I'd like your thoughts on the matter regardless.
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cunning_linguist · 116 views
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Why change it to mature?
It's a rather touchy subject because they're just nightmares and there hasn't been any "real" harm yet.
199995
Last chapter I dedicated a paragraph to Spike being incinerated.
200003 and in the chapter before, you nearly killed RD.
By the way, you're a chapter away from getting a downvote from me. Don't you DARE kill off any of the characters, or I go bye bye.
200018
Pfft. Death is too easy. I can do worse.
200021
Neither torture nor weeping for death.
Never scenes that make them almost-live-then-die-in-hooves.
With all seriousness, I don't want you do do anything that would break a heart. You are right in the sense that a quick death isn't that emotional, but just don't, if you want to keep me.
Please?
200027
Don't fret. The dark tag was mostly because... well... how the hell could I have Nocturne in Equestria without a bit of DAAAAAAHKNESSSSSSSSSSS?
No pony is going to die, be severely mutilated, or put into some kind of unsettling al-Qaeda situation.
... Except for maybe Riven, though I suppose I've already beaten her up enough.
200037 THANK GOD.
A little bit of darkness is fine with me. Carry on.