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i am a upcoming writer looking for helpful advice from the ponies here on FIMfiction. also Luna is best pony! :)))))

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    Stars

    Look up-

    into the sky.

    Where the stars shine bright,

    and bring forth hope to us.

    Looking off into the distant sky-

    the stars lose you.

    You stare and stare-

    you don't think-

    you only dream.

    They help us dream-

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Dec
19th
2014

Stars · 8:35pm Dec 19th, 2014

Look up-

into the sky.

Where the stars shine bright,

and bring forth hope to us.

Looking off into the distant sky-

the stars lose you.

You stare and stare-

you don't think-

you only dream.

They help us dream-

They give us hope-

They show faith.

"Only heroes live in the stars," they say.

I don't buy it.

Only wishes and dreams,

Live on in the stars.

Tonight-

Wish for something-

Tell the stars a secret-

They'll never tell a soul.

Ever.

By Jesica Adkins

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