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CommanderOfTheNewLunarRe

i am a upcoming writer looking for helpful advice from the ponies here on FIMfiction. also Luna is best pony! :)))))

CommanderOfTheNewLunarRe Joined 28th Sep, 2014 · Offline

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  • 464 weeks
    Editor? Anypony?

    alright so i am looking for a editor to assist me by telling me how to make my stories better!
    Please PM if you would like to help or have any questions.

    0 comments · 182 views

  • 469 weeks
    Assisatance please

    so i want to write good fics so if you read mine please tell me what you thought could be changed to make it better. I'm looking for FRIENDLY advice not like this:

    This is pretty much the perfect example of a badfic.
    Well done. 8/8.

    Read More

    0 comments · 191 views

  • 486 weeks
    Stars

    Look up-

    into the sky.

    Where the stars shine bright,

    and bring forth hope to us.

    Looking off into the distant sky-

    the stars lose you.

    You stare and stare-

    you don't think-

    you only dream.

    They help us dream-

    Read More

    0 comments · 212 views
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Assisatance please · 5:02pm Apr 17th, 2015

so i want to write good fics so if you read mine please tell me what you thought could be changed to make it better. I'm looking for FRIENDLY advice not like this:

This is pretty much the perfect example of a badfic.
Well done. 8/8.

This really hurt because i don't know what was wrong just that you thought it was bad. I can't fix it if i don't know what's wrong with and thus, i can't become better.

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