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Eric Michael Kline


I like fantasy. I like heroes. And unsurprisingly, I idolize Master Tolkien.

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  • 431 weeks
    A bit of some bad news

    I'm afraid I have some bad news in regards to the story. About a few days ago, my 4 year old laptop up and died on me which pretty much destroyed the latest chapter. I was hoping to get it up by month's end but now I'm afraid it won't be out until Feb.

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  • 436 weeks
    Additional Info

    Just a few things I wanted to talk about in regards to the story.

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  • 437 weeks
    Villainy 101

    And so the identity of the Shadow has been revealed. I know it was pretty obvious from the start but at least I hope I made it dramatic enough.

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  • 437 weeks
    I'm back baby!

    Greetings to all my readers. It's certainly been a while hasn't it? My goal was to finish this story within a year but it seems as though life had other plans for me. Over the past few months, I've had to spend an unexpected hiatus on personal matters. You see, I suffer from depression but a new therapist and new medication has done wonders for me. It's also forced me to take a good hard

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  • 463 weeks
    The Discord Effect

    So let's talk about what I've done in this latest chapter. Mirror Discord being defeated by the Shadow following his possession of Mirror Sombra is what's known as a Worf Effect; when the biggest and strongest character is defeated by the villain as a means to show how much of a threat the villain is. Not only did the Shadow defeat MD, but also managed to seal his powers, and by extension those

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Dec
17th
2014

Mr. Dustmop, OC's, and Sue/Stu characters · 6:30am Dec 17th, 2014

In the latest chapter of my fic, we met an OC by the name of Dustmop, an elderly unicorn janitor who was called out of retirement to get Star Swirl's library into shape for its new owner. To be honest, I was a little nervous about including an OC in this story, especially considering a lot of OC's for MLP fanworks are either author avatars, cheap clones of cannon characters, or the offspring of shipped characters that if one takes a moment to think about would never happen (IE-an OC that is the offspring of Celestia and Discord for instance). The result is a Mary Sue/Gary Stu character that completely ruins the story.

Now let's take a moment and discuss what makes a Sue/Stu character. Contrary to popular belief, Sues/Stus appear not only in fan works but original works as well where they are known as Canon Sues/Stus. (Some of the more insufferable Cannon Sues/Stus I've seen are Bella Swan from Twilight, the titular character from Suzuka, and Rand al'Thor from the Wheel of Time). But what is it that makes a Sue/Stu character? The common belief is that Sue/Stu characters are always awesome at whatever they do, are flawlessly attractive, and can do no wrong in their actions. But is this really what makes a Sue/Stu? I've seen characters who were these things and more and yet were still likable and relatable because in the end, they existed for the story rather than the story existing for them. To me that is what defines a Sue/Stu character.

Going back to Dustmop, while I can't predict how my readers will respond to him, I hope at least they'll grant me a chance to flesh out both him and his role in the story. In time, more will be revealed about him and his connection to what's going on in both Prime and Mirror Equestria. Although, I'm sure some of my more observant readers have already figured it out from the clues I've already left.

...To be continued.

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