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Nov
29th
2014

Pinkieviduality Chapter 1 - EDITORS WANTED · 7:12pm Nov 29th, 2014


That's right, I'm looking for editors to go over chapter 1 of the yet-unreleased "Pinkieviduality".

Yes, finally, after what turns out to be exactly 2 years and one day since the first draft, then typing up 50+ pages out of chronological order while repeatedly going in and out of "hiatus" on that little side-project, I figured "buck it, I gotta finish up the first chapter and go from there".
Basically, I got tired of always telling people that "I'm also working on another story, but I can't show you because I haven't published anything yet." :ajbemused:

Obviously, no promises of any schedules whatsoever, my writing speed is too unpredictable for that, sorry. :twilightblush:

Especially since "Daring Do and the Secret of the Fourth Wall" is still going, if somewhat sluggishly at the moment.
(It's that one blasted scene in chapter 10. -_-;; Not that I haven't gone ahead and written other, later scenes anyway. ^_^;;)

Editors should...
- Help me fix up spelling / grammar / odd phrasing / story-formatting
- Look over the narrative for anything that can or should be improved

Anypony up for it? :rainbowdetermined2:


To recap, "Pinkieviduality", in five words:

Mirror-Pinkie joins the circus. :pinkiehappy:

I don't have a catchy "book back-cover text" at the moment, though the general summary is this:


She didn't run. She didn't escape. One of Pinkie's clones simply wandered off, out of town, and stumbled into a traveling circus.

The ponies there had never met the original Pinkie Pie. They treated her like any normal pony.

Well... relatively "normal", anyway.

And thus begins a tale of fun, friendship, and basic lifelessons, such as, but not limited to:
- "Breaking other ponies' stuff is bad"
- "Eating cake that doesn't belong to you is also bad"
- "It's more fun to share the fun"
- "Oh for the love of Celestia, Pinkie, what are you doing in the manticore-cage? ...Again?"

No existential angst or preposterous accusations of "you're just a copy" here, no siree! :derpytongue2:

A few months later, she returns to Ponyville...

Woops.

Can the grim conclusion of "Too Many Pinkie Pies" be led towards a happy ending? :pinkiegasp:


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Comments ( 1 )

Ah, splendid! I'm afraid that I'm a bit busy to volunteer myself at the moment, but I wish you good luck!

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