Nov
1st
2014
Critism needed · 5:07pm Nov 1st, 2014
Well hello there everyone.
The next chapter is up and I still feel a little bit too save. My work is by far not perfect and has many aspects it may need improvements.
To do so I need you guys!
Just tell me blunt (but with a decent amount of manners) what you think needs some improvements.
This will help me to improve my work and it helps you to get a better story to read.
Other than that....
Have a nice weekend and look forward to part 4 :)
