You've got opportunities in this community...

And you just have to grab them!

My first story is finally concluded, the third chapter "Combined" is up now.
Meanwhile the previous chapters have been updated, mostly typo and grammar issues, but also rearrangement of scenes. So please take a look at them again for maximus satitfaction.

And I want to thank some people specially for that.
My pre-readers Trivial, scotty7, zwiesel and the anonymus ones.
For his critique and the time he invested, AkibaWhite.
And everyone who read and liked the story, even if it was and still is improvable.

I've learned much from this first atttempt in fiction writing for a broad audience and I would love to continue that.
So now I'm thinking about how to continue, I'll probably switch genres now, got some ideas for "Comedy" and "Crossover".
But time is rare and other projects keep me busy, so if you are looking for more frequently updates, feel free to check my external accounts at DeviantArt and YouTube.

Schön Tach,
Theorak