New here

Well, I am new to posting here. So any constructive feedback is helpful. Especially on my story.

Also some friends would be nice too.
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Some information about myself.

Name: Robbieagray91
Age: Earlier to Mid Twenties (but in truth it isn't any of your business).
Gender: Male
Likes: Horror fiction, Thriller fiction, Sci-fi, Fantasy, Mystery, Myst, Macaroni and Cheese (homemade), Bacon, Pizza (who doesn't love pizza), Jalapenos, Hot Sauce
Dislikes: People who attack other peoples work, Mushrooms (I hate the texture, however I don't mind the sauce), books/movies that only sell because they have a "saucy" sex scene (If you need a sex scene to sell your book/movie and the rest of the story is cr**, then you need to go back to the drawing board).
Phobias: Dogs (but I am kind of over it now), Heights (I HATE HEIGHTS!!!), Spiders (Have one crawl into your bathrobe while you are taking a shower and you would be scared of them too), Hornets/Bees/Yellow Jackets/anything with a stinger.
Am I a Brony: I am technically what you would call a Grimbro. I am a bigger fan of the darker side of the MLP universe then the MLP universe itself.
Dreams: I am training to be a MLT (Medical Lab Technician) and I want to get a house, a car, then get married and have a family.

Alright, there is some stuff about me.