First chapter of Derpyball reedited and written · 7:45pm Jun 9th, 2012
I've just finished reworking on the first chapter of Derpyball. It's improved a lot so I wouldn't mind a bit of feedback. I'll work on chapter 2 sometime next week.
Rated out.
"You think you know me..."
I've just finished reworking on the first chapter of Derpyball. It's improved a lot so I wouldn't mind a bit of feedback. I'll work on chapter 2 sometime next week.
Rated out.