A Genuine Request

This is Daisy Jo. It hasn't been published yet.

I would really appreciate it if you guys could read it over and help me address a few things I'm contemplating. Specifically...

- Is using "dramatic, over-the-top" in the description kind of a double-negative? Or is it acceptable?
- I know it warrants the comedy tag, but does it need any other tags besides that? SoL? Even Random?
- Should the "many" in the chapter title ("So many Italics!") be capitalized? (I really do feel like I should know this one, but...oops.)
- Does it contradict what we've seen in canon enough to warrant an AU tag? (It contradicts some of Applebuck Season, Boast Busters, and any other episode besides A Friend in Deed that shows cows in the background)
- Are there too many italics that it's annoying to read, or does it just show Daisy Jo's character, like I'm hoping it will?
- Is there any hope of it placing in the contest?

Nah, I'm kidding on that last one. But I am excited to submit it! This is going to be a crazy contest, and I'm super excited to see how it'll play out.

Thanks for any and all help you can give,
Driz