Rejected · 3:03am Jul 27th, 2014
This story was rejected because of tasteless comedy by Twilight's library.
And for mis spelling of words.
I meant to mis spell the words, because they were drunk. *Face hoofs*
And the reviewer didn't like my taste in comedy. For example, here is what he said for this part:
pplebloom joined in, slurring: "I've evennnn heard mahhh brotherrrr wakeee uppp froom nightmareees aboutcha scraeming "GER THAT BITCHE AWAY FRERM MEH"!" she yelled as she took a sip of her beer.
Story's comedy is tasteless when dealing with sensitive issues.
They were drunk, I wasn't aiming for funny. Just thinking about what a drunk person might say when angry. Or drunk foal in this case.
So only one grammar mistake that I fixed. It wasn't even that big. Just had to use this: ' instead of this: " (See above)
I'm angry. What do you guys think?
Should've specified it was that word. My bad...
The reason is the underage drinking being made light of. I hate to be the bearer of such news, but underage drinking and drugs just... isn't tasteful to Twilight's Library standards.
Sorry, mate. Feel free to submit anything else. You're funny, you'll get there.
Now that I think about it, that premise maybe wasn't the best idea. Call it a sudden realization about the implications of the story. It's okay though, we all make mistakes, and we can all learn from them. Heck, I've said things in real life that I've regretted moments later. I wish you luck with your future stories, and sorry that the rejection came as a surprise. Don't worry, I'll still support you.
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Doesn't Twilight's Library allow bestiality?
I want to add one more thing and say that one of my stories turned out to be offensive without me realizing it, so I know exactly what it's like to make that kind of huge mistake. All we can do is apologize and keep on writing.
2319112 I added note saying,"DO NOT TRY ANY OF THIS AT HOME,"
Don't want kids getting ideas...