Two new story ideas, but should I do it? · 1:19am Jun 26th, 2014
So from the title, we all know I'm thinking about posting a new story, but I'm just not sure if I should post them. Please tell me what you think is the right move once your done reading the idea of my new story.
First story
Death is always watching
Every living creature knows of death, and his cold, lifeless, deadly touch. The living all know the pain of losing a loved one to death, but what do the dead feel once death has captured them in his boney hands. Me, and several other souls have now found out what that very feeling is. Power, bloodlust, and rage. We have been chosen to fight for death, and to free him from his prison. All I can say is, ALL HAIL THE LORD OF DEATH! ALL HAIL LORD TIREK!
Yeah, I'm not sure about his one, but I do have a good feeling about it. I will most likely make some changes to the plot.
Second story
No place for magic
2020, the living have died, and the dead are alive. That is our world, that is humanities world. Full of death, and depression. No laws, no government, and hardly any hope left. I could care less about it all anymore. I've gotten used to it. All I care for is survival, and that's it. I don't care for people, new governments, or the dead. I only care for me. But one day something happened while I was searching for supplies, something... strange.
So this is the second story. I know I have a bunch of other stories to worry about, but I could give damn. But before you think this will affect my time with my other stories, do not worry, since it is summer I will have a lot more time on my hands. I'm still searching for a new job, so that will affect my time, but don't worry.
Anyways, please let me know what is a right move. I will not post these two stories at the same time, so please choose which one you like the most.
And as always, have a good day, or night. :]
I really think you should just work on the stories you have already posted like Two insane idiots and CRAZY...NO...INSANE...YES. Work on those two the most please. But I like "No place for magic". But by the description I would rather call it "No Place For Friendship Or Harmony".
2234840 I like the name
"No place for magic" sounds a bit weird
and putting "No Place For The Magic of friendship and harmony" not sure if I said that right and that name doesnt sound very good
I like the second one but not the first
still I think you should just focus on the stories you have now
2242414 I would call it "No Place For Friendship Or Harmony".
2242904 I would too