Comments and criticism!

Hello, all! I know that the audience that will actually read this post is scarce, but I'm glad that my first story on FIMFiction is getting more and more attention! Thank to you everypony for supporting me in my endeavors! ^w^

As it were, however, I would also appreciate it if you could just leave a comment below my story expressing constructive criticism. It really helps me grow as an author to get user-feedback besides how many likes or dislikes my work receives. I know it might be asking a lot, but if those of you who liked and disliked my story could also be so kind as to comment criticism, I would appreciate it! It doesn't have to be long, either. Just show your opinion toward it, things you liked, things I could improve on.

Of course, do this in your own time. ^^" There's no rush and no need if you simply find that you're unable to, or you don't have the time, or what have you. Just know that every little bit helps, even if it's negative feedback! I also reply to your comments to and say nice things about you; you can't go wrong. :D

Thanks for reading this long blog post. Arielle, out.