Soooo... Reliving Memories.
Don't worry, I'm not announcing anything bad. I promised I will finish the story, and I still intend to do just that.
I know it has been a long, long time since I started, and especially since I last published a chapter.
There are multiple reasons for this.
I wouldn't do this under normal circumstances, but this is an exception.
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If anyone is reading these posts at all 
– could you guys do me a favor and tell me what you think about the new version of chapter 4 (basically the first half of it is new)?
I put a lot of work into some parts and since I'll probably write something like that again at some point, I'd like to get some feedback so I can improve my writing skills 
Thanks in advance!
Just a tiny notification that I finished the workload for my studies and that I also got back to writing a few days ago. Reliving Memories is still alive and I will continue working on it until it's finished... some day ;)
About 2/3 of chapter 7 are done and I plan to finish it ASAP.
If anyone is reading these posts at all – could you guys do me a favor and tell me what you think about the new version of chapter 4 (basically the first half of it is new)?
I put a lot of work into some parts and since I'll probably write something like that again at some point, I'd like to get some feedback so I can improve my writing skills
Thanks in advance!
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I'm not sure I remember how the old chapter four went, but I'll go back and re-read later tonight!
Yep, it's been too long-- I went back and re-read it, and thought it was good, but I'll be darned if I can tell you how it's different from the old chapter four. Sorry, I'm just a happy reader who loves the story, not good at feedback.
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It's ok, I didn't expect anyone to remember^^ Still, the whole dialogue with Twilight and Luna about immortality is new, along with the poem. The previous version had just a lot of exposition and to make a long story short, they kissed after they woke up.
Seriously, poetry in a foreign language is hard
2172674 OH! The poem was damn nice, now that you mention it.
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Great to hear you enjoyed it