Didn't see this coming.

Here and Fanfiction, two people asked me to look over their stories. Fanfiction was just a look over. Here, I was asked to edit. The one here, I mentioned that I'm still new and told them about some groups that would have better help than I could ever give. Both of these took me by surprise.

Comments

[panzerbrony]

good job mate. it seems like you have a reputation on those sites as well

[Darth Redbeard]

2165792 I'll have to improve more before doing any editing on someone's story.

[Pyriel]

Good job, friend. It's nice knowing people want your help, eh?

[Darth Redbeard]

2165807 took me by surprise on that. Maybe my stories are getting better.

[Darth Redbeard]

2165792 2165807 And my OC story is almost ready. I put in a request for an editor to see if anyone is up for it. Just need a second opinion.

[Pyriel]

2165817 if you mean the war story, sorry to say guys, but I don't think I'll be able to write mine. I'm focusing what little I can on In the Dark, and past that I don't have any real inspiration to start another story.

[Darth Redbeard]

2165832 Panzer has the war story. I'm doing the OC one.

[panzerbrony]

2165832 don't worry about it there were many moments in the Rp where we split up and did separate things.

[Darth Redbeard]

2165838 aye, like you getting put in the brig by a crazy mare.

[panzerbrony]

2165843 yup o////o

[Darth Redbeard]

2165852 And me getting my butt kicked by Sombra, Tirek, and my main opponent. And of course, getting captured and dealing with a crazy dragon (2165832 ) that tried to kill me.

[Pyriel]

2165836 oh, I'm doing my oc's backstory eventually, I'm just trying to get my story's next chapter (which'll be longer) out.

[Darth Redbeard]

2165865 good luck

[panzerbrony]

2165865 just focus on your story first mate we can wait

[Pyriel]

Most of my OCs are creatures of impulse and instinct. Ignis was a cheeky bugger who liked causing trouble and doing what he likes. His discorded version is serious, seeing things in black and white as it were. He saw you as foolish, and decided to take it upon himself to rid you of being above him.

[Darth Redbeard]

2165879 and guess what happened.

[Pyriel]

2165887 I still don't understand what the point of that hex was supposed to be.

[Darth Redbeard]

2165934 Knock you out. I used it on whole armies and wiped them out, just used more power on them than you. You only got about 5% of that power hitting you.

[Pyriel]

2165941 well it clearly didn't work, considering I was still conscious enough that Luna got to talk.

[Darth Redbeard]

2165944 be glad it wasn't full blast. You'd be out of it for a month.