May
24th
2012
A Busman's Holiday · 7:02pm May 24th, 2012
If you're reading A Busman's Holiday, you should know that some changes have been made to the first three chapters, making the transition towards Defty's staying with the Apples smoother. The introduction of Meanie is as sudden as ever. I don't think she'd have it any other way.
The idea here is to try to get the fic accepted at Equestria Daily, allowing for more views. The edits were done to address concerns the prereaders had with the character, the way he was introduced, and his relationship with the Apples.
I don't know that they'll give the story a second look, but I'm crossing my hooves, as I'm really proud of this one.
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They're like baseball and bowling rolled together. Three strikes and your out, you turkey!