I Got Around to Editing it... -Dazzler Star · 2:47am Apr 13th, 2014
So I had some time left over from like real life (whatever that is) and I got a chance to edit the Trixie story (sorry really long title with a lot of capitals and hyphens and stuff) Nothing major, and it ends the same way (you'd know if you read it) I just got the kinks out, improved it a little. You know extra words here and there, little more semi colon less comma, all that jazz.
But anyways I'm starting work on The Confessions of an Unnoticeable pony (with New Dawn, of course.) It's jounal entries...ya know what? Browse through the blog...I posted something about it awhile ago.
"That sounds like another depressing story?" You ask, well yeah it is, but it's happy in the ending.
"When are we going to get an upbeat story from you?" When I write one I guess. Ask New Dawn, she's good at that kind of thing.
-Dazzler Star
It looks a whole lot better after a round of editing. Sorry if I came off as a jerk. The only reason I bothered commenting at all was that it was a good premise: I saw the story had potential. Hopefully you'll forgive my bluntness, and I hope you took something away from it.
Respectfully,
OneNinerKilo
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Oh no don't worry. You were completely correct and I don't believe in judging people if I don't know them, so don't worry about how you phrase/comment things around me. And yes, thank you, always up for constructive criticism, always room for improvement!
-Dazzler Star