Fantasia Archsage Reviews "Lesson Learned" · 8:44pm Apr 4th, 2014

“Lesson Learned”

Written by Inky Shades

Reviewed by Fantasia Archsage

Hello guys, welcome to my six review of the Fantasia Archsage Reviews or “FAR” series, and I bring to you all “Lesson Learned”

Now, I wasn’t a huge fan of the movie, Equestria Girls. Yeah, I said it. I didn’t really find the movie worth remembering in any sort of way so much so I almost forget how the ending went. But oddly enough this story happen to catch my eye while going through some new stories.

Yeah, when I see a pony in tears, I usually becoming sad and would read the fic to figure out what made them so sad. Also, I’m sucker for sad fic. But the author really made a good alternate ending for the ending of Equestria Girls and I thought it would be interesting for you guys to check it out.

My first response was not to read it not because it was an alternate ending, I like when people take interesting turns on the story. But I was afraid it was not going to be so good, cuz it’s one thing I believe to write and alternate ending but doing it right is another. But I was like to hell I already clicked the story, might as well read it.

And so I did.

When I started reading it, the author somehow got me right away in the beginning with, I believe, good narration. I loved how the author really caught all of how Sunset Shimmer felt before he punishment, which basically was most of the story.

The ending was quite interesting and a little surprising. I wasn’t really expecting it to turn out the way it did to be honest. I could didn’t fully explain how good the narration was all I could really say is read it for yourself.

The story overall was great, and I think it was a nice and short evening read. Okay, so the was a few mistakes here and there but unless you like hating on every mistaking in a story it wasn’t bad at all. I liked it. The character dialogue were done well. And for a story that did an alternate ending of the movie I would’ve definitely enjoyed this ending very much.

What I liked most of this story would have to be the narration for Sunset, I think that was really done great. Just how she was processing her thoughts moments before her punishment was simply amazing. And the fact that my half hour of reading it deeply was fun! Many may disagree with me on certain concepts of this story or maybe how fast sunset changed, but this is my review, and I'm entitled to my own opinions! Okay.

Anyways that’s all I have on this story. You guys should definitely take a read at if you’re not doing anything this evening. And with that, I’m calling it and evening. I’ll be on skype and gdocs for the rest of the evening if I don’t have anything else to do.

This is the Fantasia Archsage Reviews or the “FAR” series, and I have brought you the story “Lesson Learned” which was written by Inky Shades and reviewed by Fantasia Archsage (me)

Comment on performance, share to the world and stay tune for my next review.

*One thing however, next week and beyond is going to get really busy for me so I’m going to try keeping it down to two reviews per week and three reviews if I’m not too busy, thank you for reading and have great day, evening, or night depending or your timezone.

Also, if you could give the author some followers and love for the story it would be much appreciated.

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