Entry #6 · 9:18am May 21st, 2012
Still working on it.
Here's a small teaser, so you can put the "Scenery Porn" trope on the page.
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The capital of Equestria had spread over the mountainsides, arranging itself in concentric terraces. Skyscrapers dug their foundations deep into the very backbone of the mountain, and reached up into the sky, glowing with afternoon’s light reflected by glass, polished steel and aluminum. Hovercars flew in from elsewhere, dropping down from their cruising altitudes to join the early afternoon traffic. The craft holding Twilight and Spike did otherwise, soaring past the upper levels of the tallest buildings and gaining altitude as it reached its destination.
The Royal Palace, the administrative seat of Equestria and her colonies. Sitting on a platform carved out of the mountain, it was a semicircle of glass, steel and bronze, curving up towards its center into a tall, elegant spire, with five smaller ones around it.
The hovercar descended, alighting in an air pad hidden behind the third smaller spire.
That's not nearly enough to be scenery porn. You need to, like, fill an entire page with descriptions of lush, rolling hills or something, bare minimum.