Finished Masks! · 8:17pm Mar 30th, 2014
Completed it last night and published the last two chapters.
I'm not to proud of the Threads chapter, but I'm glad that I got the story completed
Link to Chapter
I skipped a lot of planned concepts that I was going to add with this story, such as when I began this story, it was supposed to be that she would open the door to the strange room and the pony would teach her to read, but I didn't know where to go from there with that idea.
The last chapter is kind of anti-climatic in my eyes still, but that's how it is supposed to be. I didn't want the protagonist to seem like a huge hero. I wanted her to die so that she seemed like an average character, not a special one blessed by the gods or some crap, kept alive to fulfill a prophecy.
More about the ending will be explained in the sequel, if I ever do start writing it.
I'm just glad I finally finished a chapter story.
