sorry for the outburst

I'll still be here to read your stories. I just don't want to read any comments like from my stories. Alright, I suck at writing, but, well, I DO NOT CARE!!! Well, I guess my dream of being an author is gone. Sorry I suck! If you say 'Yeah, you do suck.' go ahead. I'm feeling like trash and Ima post this on my blog! So, well, GOODBYE TO MY STUPID ANTICS OK?! *rage outburst and breaks the computer*

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But michi...the path to improvement is through practice. Don't give up on yourself...

[Scootareader]

Allow me to offer some serious counsel for a moment, if I may.

Serious face time.

All right, I've only read one of the two fanfics that you've got up right now, and I commented on it. I guess you probably ignored it, which is perfectly fine. At the very least, you aren't deleting the criticism of assholes like myself, and that is a very, very good thing. Nothing makes the FIMFiction community angrier than a bunch of deleted comments--and not making the community angry is a good thing, for clarification.

I read a very, very deep theme--that is, suicide--in your story. That is most certainly not something to write about as an amateur. That's something I don't think I could possibly do justice to. Suicide isn't as simple as, "I've thought about what it would be like to kill myself." No, this is a much more serious theme for a very simple issue, which is an unexpected relationship that caused huge spikes of out-of-character (OOC) moments, which, in turn, caused the story to get hated.

Applejack and Twilight are both far, far too happy to be pushed to kill themselves, especially by their closest friends. No bloody way.

Note that Summer Sun Celebration isn't being universally hated; that's because it's not a controversial topic, such as FREAKING SUICIDE. You can improve your writing with cute, silly stories like that, then save the more serious stories with the controversial topics when you have the skill to back it up. Just... don't go diving off any more precipices.

Feel free to message me your story ideas, and I will give you my honest opinion on if I think you're capable of writing them without getting an angry mob of readers.

[Clover Skies]

Practice Makes PERFECT. I am not a good writer either! I enjoy the fact that you won't give up, even from all these REALLY MEAN COMMENTS. Keep writing and you will improve

[Cheer]

1964026

What he said. Don't give up on writing. LEARN from what people say. Good and bad.

[World Builder]

I hope you only go away forever for a few days. I need more trollfics like this.