Its that safe/dark place where we'll tear you apart. Grim/dark only goes so far.

Luna, I love Pinkamena! "Diane" as I call her.
I was proud... very, disappointed, and prepared for the worst when I'd finished writing this fable.

So far my most entertaining story has been this very one,the attention to detail and first attempt portraying fluid action that wasn't repetitive was more a challenge than I thought. The most difficult thing,(the only thing really) is trying to bring every motion and angle into the eyes/minds of the reader seeing as everyone's imagination plays its own set of tricks at a certain pace.

Also I know "Grim" anything doesn't get very far, seeing as all who watch FiM undoubtedly like adorable things, there is no denying that. So blood and demise will never had a time to shine as much as the rest, which is saddening but if you only write for fame and not because you enjoy pen, ink, or a pensive point of view then you most likely will never write anything grim. That or it just doesn't suit your sense of appeal, neither is wrong.

So far I consider this my best work, all the detail, and information that went into this is what makes it so favored above the others. And I hope more eyes will give it a glance.