Mar
28th
2014
Cutie Mark Crusader Doctor · 10:26am Mar 28th, 2014
Originally for the second chapter, when I was still hiding the story away from everyone, the doctor was supposed to meet Apple Bloom at the bottom of the school house hill, and she would drag him all the way to her club house for no damn reason other then to bring a colt who didn't speak equine to the club and make him a cutie mark crusader. I also made it so she had a crush on him (romantic sub plot ho! I wonder if I do romance correctly...) I realized though that it made no sense and was going a little too fast, so I had to fix everything and write it differently, so now instead of being dragged to the club house, he goes to Sugar Cube Corner instead to satisfy his sweet tooth. I think this turned out much better then my original plan.
uh, which story is it?
I'm just a bit confused.
1961477
The story is tagged.
1962687 ah, that story.
thanks, there goes the confusion out the window ..
is this Dr. Whooves, but he looks sad for some reason?
seems a short enough story, just may be fun ..
1963174
Hes a colt, that's why he is sad.
1963718 I guess he did not want to be a pony, then?
Most of us would have loved to be the colt.
even if some of us had prefered to be a fillie instead.
then again, you can't get everything, right?
1963767
He didn't want to be a colt, because he is supposed to be a stallion, but he was changed into a colt.
1963854
your making no sense about anything.
1964353
Yeah...your English has lost all comprehension for me. I cant understand anything your trying to really say. Im sorry.
1964391 then I'll just leave this conversation.