Chapter 6 Rough Release Date · 2:51am Mar 26th, 2014
So just a small little update. I am not sure if anybody read these but eh if you like to stay updated on the story I am not going to stop you :)
Chapter 6 should be out give or take 2 weeks time, it all depends on how my Game Dev project goes. So far it seems to be turning out quite well... Enemy AI is programmed in, player shoots bullets, etc... But no one wants to hear about my game dev projects :P.
I actually started reading the story out loud to myself, and recording it to see what I can improve on. I have noticed that some things I have in descriptions are repetitive, and don't really need to be there. Surprisingly the whole recording thing is helping out a lot. It forces me to go over each sentence one by one, and grammar errors start to stick out like a sore thump for obvious reasons. I also need to work on my description from what I can tell. Right now its at an okay level, but it doesn't really engage the readers that much, so I will try to improve on that.
So yeah just a small update for people. If you have any thoughts on the story, or any criticism for me as a writer, feel free to leave it here.
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1956084 Lol thanks
. It does mean a lot that people are enjoying this. At first I just wrote it to have something to do while I waited for class. Now I actually look forward to it every night... Although I have to stop writing at 1:00 AM...
1956089 turn off the clock? then 1 am never comes.