May
19th
2012
Prologue Reworked · 3:09am May 19th, 2012
Okay so some of you might have noticed that the Prologue has been bumped up in its date and that it has the word (Reworked) to one side. Well thanks to the help of both Sorren and Spanner/Dex. That is what happened, the three of us went in there, (and boy was it scary! Surprised I have any readers after rereading it!) But I am digressing, point is us three went and did a major edit of the story. Reworded some of the sentences and fixed up a TON of grammar mistakes. I like comma's too much I guess. Anyways if you guys want to reread it, it should be easier to read now. In addition, I plan to work with both Sorren and Spanner to get the other chapters fixed up as well. Now it's late and I hear my bed calling me.
So Good Night!
