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Derek Watterson


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Mar
7th
2014

SO HAPPY! Plus updates on story status's and sh-tuff. · 9:02pm Mar 7th, 2014

So uh.... yea...
My first story on this site is just 20 or so views away from reaching 200 views... and I am loving it!

I have a total of 24 likes, 15 dislikes (So sad, please tell me what was wrong!), 7 comments, 29 favorites, and I have gotten 5 new watchers!

And that makes me happy, because I was writing it in-between my other 3 stories as a sort of vent writing for my stupidity....

If your wondering about the grammar/spelling mistakes, I happen to write on a tablet, with Word 2013, so it likes to auto correct me before I go back and edit errors, so I miss some stuff when I quick-skim through it. I also wanna focus more on my other stuff (so I can post them here) so it received the short end of the stick.

I do intend on going back and editing it, possibly over the weekend while I'm gone, but I don't know.

I need and editor, a pre-reader, and any other help anyone can give, so if your interested or can send me to someone I can get to edit it, that would be great. Or if you can send someone my way, that would be nice too.

On another note, I AM still working on my other stories as of now, so I will continue to work on Giant Dick Joke (GDJ henceforth) as I have, as in it will be there for venting out the stupidity that wont make it into my other stories.

I as of now am working on a pony filled chapter for FYAYR! (F*** You, And Your Rules!) so that I can submit that soon, and I have come to the conclusion that my other story (TFPD), which in all honesty I could probably get away with posting now if I wanted, will not be posted until I arrive somewhere in the 10,000 word area, because it starts of in a way I think would scare of most readers because it comes off as cliche and dumb. I assure you however that it there are reasons that it is not. And Sorry Jack... Better Luck Next Time... is in the middle of going through my brainstorming sessions, mainly because I need to make sure it fits with what the song has, while also featuring the Mane 6 as correct in their character style, and making sure it comes off as reasonable for Jacks love life to be shitty.

I am as of right now nearing 9500 words on FYAYR! total, 3600 words in the first chapter, and the rest belonging to the third, I am working on a second chapter that is more or less a recap of what happened in the past (of which is only vaguely hinted at in the first chapter and IS most of the third) from the eyes of the ponies.

Like I said, The First Pure Darkness... is NOT going to be posted until I feel that it either has enough to draw in older readers who would normally skip a story like itself because of how many crap fics there are out there, or it reaches 10K words... I am 2,700 words in, so yea, gonna be a tough one to write for...

Anyways now thats all over, I just watched the Sword Art Online movie on Crunchyroll.com, and it was mostly a recap. Still entertaining but a recap, which is a smart move on the part of the animator and the general people in charge of that anime, because it had been about a year since it started airing on Crunchyroll, and I forgot quite a bit. The reason its a smart move though, is because Sword Art Online II :Phantom Bullet! is "Activating 2014"... see what they did there... its not coming out, its not releasing, its not premiering, or any other NORMALLY used word for a show, its "Activating"... Anyways its rumored to release in April, so look forward to it.

Yea, and believe it or not, I am actually kinda hype... Mainly because my inner FPSer is gunning (hehe) for that new game in the show called Gun Gale Online, or GGO. And yes, you heard right, its another RPG game in SWORD ART ONLINE... With guns... and motherfriggin lightsabers...

Yea I have a fix for SAO that would probably get everyone and their mother off their goddamn backs... go back, do the first season OVER with only the SAO world, re-title the season as SAO: Floating Castle Aincrad, or something of the like, and then do a second season off Alfhiem Online arc, then do a third season with GGO, and then do a fourth season later on with Underworld. I think most people would be happy with this because A) it makes friggin sense, B) it would mean they could do more character development and fix the whole "Girl of the day" Arc, as well as fix Asuna's character, and at least drop the goddamn time skips a little.

Sorry about this, I got off on a tangent and I apologize, I also apologize for bringing it up on FIMFiction of all places, but alas, I let things get the better of me...

Plus if you need a trailer to believe the whole SAO II thing, have TWO:

(The video on bottom say season three because most people tell themselves that Alfhiem was season two, but that's not true...)

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