Mar
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pre-reader. · 9:45pm Mar 6th, 2014
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Dear twilight517828,
Your story some times a lie is easier to take. has failed moderation on FimFiction for the following reason: You have almost no capitalization.
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just so that you know the mane story's I do are.
Gravity falls-mlp crossovers with some sad moments here and there some times with a bit of blood.
so if you are entrusted pleas PM me I will get back to you asap.
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i will find all the mesegaes!!!
1929293
you're not to late and that wold be cool.
1929827 ahhhh, the loveable ness of mispelled words.
1930013
ya they are kindda funny.
1932721
but, like the body part is spelt butt. but i still spell it as but
1933584
Lol but no butts
1933896 some where a puppy just died.
of a natrual cause.
1934633 there was a cat boin with two faces
1934823
every time macentosh smiles, a puppy is born and a old dog dies
apple jack wount let him smile
1934835
The new puppy replcess the old dog. No?
1934840
sorta, but aif he smiles AJ's dog might die
1934846
Good point but applebloom would be happy to get a puppy
1934854 who said they would get the puppy?
the puppy is born into a random place
and last i checked, their dog would be dead
1934888 so applejack culd get one from fluttershy
1934922 i don't know if flutter shy has dogs
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she has her ways.
i3.kym-cdn.com/photos/images/newsfeed/000/468/989/87e.png
1935006
thats Aj'sdog
the one thats going to die
1935100
s3.amazonaws.com/bronibooru/sample/296f77c5be2ea7346bf464d1576c6ab8.jpg
rainbowdash.net/file/pony-20120305T220533-jwps3f7.jpeg
1935104 ...
i didn't know
1935118
Fluttershy has the puppys
1935122
why did she keep them?
1935123
so that if Aj's dog dies she has back up.
1935126 unless fluttershy had them all adopted
1935131
nope they had puppy's which Fluttershy gave some away but still keep 5
1935137 i haven't finihed season 3 yet,... so i'm not sure what happeneed
1935157
it does not show in season 3 or 4
1935159 then u must have skipped it, or it was removed from youtube
1935165
and that is not a lie.
I have seen all episodes
1935177
1935177 well i'll watch it again
1935183
too many episodes for me to watch them all again.
1935190 i just linked riot becuas i was listening to it
. and thier are a lot.
1935202
I know there are a lot.
this song is kinda like me in science in my first class they all picked on me one day when the teacher left for a minute.
1935218
i hate schools, and how they can't get with the program
1935222
things are allot better now but still.
me in year 9 and a bit of this year.
1935231
soon, i'll have to give one of my seriously intense talks to you
and those are not for everyone
1935237
it's ok I have some good teachers and two good friends that sometimes fight each outer over nothing important.
1935243 it's already in plan, you can not stop it
(eggman's theme/Dr. robotnicks theme)
1935260
only with season 1 pokemon
1935264 only reason i enjoy going to the gardens
i'vesneezed so much latly
1935269
I have not played that game
has not sneezed yet.
1935273 chao garden is in sonic.
i;m tired so i'm gonna stop sending vidios.
1935280
i know that much I played it once like 10-11 years ago on a ps1
ok
1935281 i loved the gardens. all i did was level my chao
1935293
all I did was race and get confused.
1935294 i learned how to race, then realized. i killed my chao
1935301
lol I was playing and almost killed his pet.
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1935303 poor chao.
well i'm sleepy, and am starting to go insane so i'll be leaving this chat for later
1935312 ok
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