update thing i guess kinda....what ever you make it #3

so i got the 1st chapter of a new shadow and translated it into Chinese and back into English,hilarity insured!

here is is lol:

Shadow raised his head again felt the familiar cold chills , feeling like tiny ice drops the needle , they touched his fur , and if he was bleeding , he would not be surprised.He could no longer feel his back, from the torment of hoofs on the cold floor , his eyes from a long sleep , he had passed part of his body , he can move his front hoofs, but even so, they blur the chain on the wall where do their own chain of ice and revel only goddess to break .
If automatic Shadow , after his eyes had become accustomed to snow again realized his case , pulling against the cold chains, so that the sound echoes small dark cell rest. This is, of course , not to prevail, even though he knows that nothing can break the shackles that only she can . And Celestia , Luna and Cadence never will.
If he had not been defeated rotting unicorn and her five low many friends, do not forget to say dragon.Right now he will crush her ​​beneath his hooves , watching her take her last breath , watching her life slowly ground slippery away.Then course, he will once again become king, but there is more land , those who ignore his will would be punished , the edge of death, beautiful unicorn horse Twilight shine, I did it more. the simple idea to let the shadow of a smile .
"I will take back what belongs to me ," Shadow grunted to himself realized that his nose did not freeze , than the voice of the wind did not expect any answer when he heard a slight rattle chains nearby .
"W - Who's there? " Kirin dark charcoal curious to ask , who is
"Why do you care ? " Answered a few rattles sound and chains , its strident tone , as if it had been crying .
The voice seemed familiar unicorn , where somepony others get sucked into this cell have a chance? If so it could be one of his slaves, they are depressed , they can not go to eternal torment will be a real pain though.But, if it is a major six or shine better of Twilight torture would be more comfortable slowly breaking sensible .
Stop thinking small shadow , because he heard the rattling of chains pony more intense this time almost decided to get out.
"No matter what you do, you'll never get out of pulling you hear my existence ! ? Only abomination called Alicorn can break it."
"Really ? ............ Grateful ," said the disembodied voice rasply then followed the chain pulled off the wall a little clicking sound .
"You're a alicorn?" Groaned the former king almost sad it is obvious torment him about the princess stuck here alone and one cold.

Who do they even think where they are ? Nobody disturbed king SOMBRA!
But then realized he was in prison, Shadow , reality hit him that he would not fight hard.Still be laughed at.
"You may be a princess , no matter who you are, Luna , Celestia , cadence I do not care , but just leave it ! I will be king one day , even in this state , you do not want provoke me ...... so just leave ! . " Long awkward silence filled the small cell, the former king of the dark looking out almost waiting for it to leave.
Finally frustrated charcoal unicorn carefully thought about , even though these value chains , enchanted Shadow has found a way to solve it , and can do little magic mind reading and levitation .
"Leave ! " Use light magic and fill cells with bright lights shining light revealing than twilight , no other former unicorn groaned again .
Shadow looked Alicorn Twilight he knows purple Alicorn is powerful, but powerful enough to get upgraded to the status of Alicorn shocked ? This is one he will never accept . Suddenly another thought to fill the unicorn mind , why Equestria is Twilight even here ? She did not know where he was imprisoned , she will be here only reason is that if she is a prisoner ........
"What is the point of leaving ? " Lavender horse answer the question asked , her position was embarrassed , as if she hiding something .
"All my friends have turned against me , even my mentor, they hate me now, they do not have anything I can do things I could
As well just stay here and freeze to death . "
Shadow is very confused. She did what it was so bad , she got sent here ? In the cold prison Shadow has accepted as home ; sobbing more alicorn still sitting awkwardly , covering her eyes.
" What did you do ...... " asked curiously charcoal stallion
"Do you want to see? " Twilight asked angrily showing her green, purple mist flow right eye staring at him .
"How ? " Stallions said more confused ...... Twilight is like him.
Purple alicorn moved out of the shadows , sitting next to her enemies Shadow
"Do you really want to know? " She sighed and confusion to achieve her status , she is in.
"Nothing but what you do , it is so ..... evil ? ? ? "
" Holocaust , I would simply force I think it is when you play with dark magic you do not even know what it will happen ...... so is my life ."
Shadow did not say anything , he was just glad he is not a person, in the way that hes not a person in jail, he is not a person in mind