Feb
6th
2014
One way ticket to Equestria has been taken down. · 5:20pm Feb 6th, 2014
I have taken it down off for the public for now as I prof reader everything single word and fixing any grammar issue i can, I feel like i grew as a writer so much because of writing stories and getting feedback from such intelligent readers, thank you all. I will be adding a lot of new details to every chapter so if you would kindly re-read them, I would be grateful, I have 2 k words done in the next chapter which I plan to write out 5k, I give you my word it'll be that long this time. I hope you all have a wonderful day and goodbye :)
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UnknownBlizzard · 502 views
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Taken, not token... XD
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1802789 XD Whoops
1804132
At least you get to play a game at Chuck-E-Cheese.
1804746 *bursted into laughing*
I SEE! what you did there! *wipes tear from eye* XD
1804746 Btw the way, have you gotten that message i sent to you about A man who found six daughters?
1804772
Yeah, but I've been bust lately with class, but today's been a snowday so I've been enjoying the free day! :D
I'll take a look at it later tonight, I promise.
I skimmed through it and some of it IS impressive.
1804776
*squeals*
1804784
Whoa there, hold your ponies...
I said SOME of it is impressive, that still mean that there is a bit of work ahead of us.
Nothing a little bit of sifting through wont fix though.
1804788 I know i know, just, easily proud!
Btw, It revealing that you said you were busy because I was like
"Aw man, i think he hates me now" XD
1804797
What? No way!
Just gonna flat out say it, but it's hard for me to hate someone if they don't try.
Furthermore, I'd need to at least have a good reason to first.
You have not given any as of yet.
1804801 That good! Well, yeah! Its good... I'm going to get back to writing? Okay? NO? yes.......
Okay I'm dragging this too long, message me when you read the story :)
1804812
Lol, alright, I'll try to get to that soon... XD