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  • 542 weeks
    I'm a Butt

    Jeez, I forgot that I had some art of Bass Charge. In case you were wondering, Bass Charge is from my new fic, Fallen. I'm not necessarily the best at detail so posting a picture of him will hopefully make it easier to picture the story in your mind. Hopefully, I'll be able to post it soon!

    ~Stay Sexy!

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  • 546 weeks
    I Doubt Anyone Reads These

    I'm pretty sure no one cares about these blog posts, but I'm just stating that I'm at about 1k words for Chapter 1 so far. Oh, and I'm introducing one of the main characters! I'll give you a hint: he's a grey pegasus. That's all and since he's in the main characters section, you'll probably figure out who he is. Also, we discover a little about Charge's sexuality, but some fine reading will let

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  • 546 weeks
    Chapter 1 for Fallen!

    Chapter 1 is officially underway, and should be out sometime within the next week. I wish I could get them in faster, but schoolwork and the like prevents that. If I weren't so crappy at time management, I would probably be able to pump out new chapters faster, but alas, I'm a procrastinating, fatass. On another note, because of Thanksgiving, I'll be having extra time to work on the chapter! This

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  • 547 weeks
    New Fan-Fic Sneak Peek!

    If you don't want to read it, you can avert your eyes and wait around for the first chapter/prologue to come out. I hope you enjoy!

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  • 548 weeks
    I'm Not Dead!

    I'm not dead! I haven't been posting any stories and I only have one. I've had this crazy long writers block that I've been trying to get over, but I have this one story in progress that I have a good feeling about. Spoiler Alert: It's a war fic. That's all and expect something from me in a day or two.

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Nov
16th
2013

New Fan-Fic Sneak Peek! · 12:32am Nov 16th, 2013

If you don't want to read it, you can avert your eyes and wait around for the first chapter/prologue to come out. I hope you enjoy!


I stumbled drunkly out of a large mansion that sat on a hill, inhaling and exhaling quickly, not able to catch my breath. My chest heaved futilely before I was able to calm myself just the slightest. "What the," I took in a large breath, "hell was that." I exhaled. All I remembered was that I was twirling a bottle of Applejack Daniel's between my hooves before a loud 'Bang!' sounded. The bottle crashed to the floor from me being to frightened (and drunk) to catch it. I had heard aggressive voices coming in my direction so I decided to get out of there. Only now did it occur to me that I should have stayed behind for my friends, whom, from what I could tell, had stayed behind.

Looking around at my environment, vision slightly impaired thanks to my dear alcohol and me being under-aged for drinking, I could barely make out the shapes of... bodies? Oh, Celestia, there were bodies everywhere. Bodies of ponies that I knew lined the streets of Zeitnahmare. Bodies of ponies that I loved and cared about. Bodies of ponies. They were blood-covered, many eyes barely opening, mouths hanging ajar. I had walked close to one who was wriggling around slightly, but I couldn't tell who they were from the blood and dirt that matted their mane and coat. I pressed my hoof to their chest, a faint, yet slow beating was what I had felt. It started to slow down even more. And more. And more. I took in a brisk breath, waiting for the beat to come back. It never did.

My throat ached, and my eyes watered, and I had all of these emotions that I couldn't comprehend thanks to the alcohol. So I did what anyone who was in a drunken-state and had just witnessed someone dying would do. I cried.

I don't have an editor and such so I'm not quite sure if there are any mistakes in the prose that I just posted. Thank-you for reading!

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