About "Pinkie Pie's Obsession" · 1:46am Nov 14th, 2013
I hate to admit it, but I dropped the ball. I was getting half like/ half dislikes and that's not the response I want. As a writer I have one job and that's to make a story's symbolism, characters, and story arc as believable and fluent as possible. I didn't do that with "PPO's", that was a project I did in two day's off of strict immersion I put myself into Pinkie's Character.
So what I've decided to do instead is spend the next month or so writing a 5 part mini series on it, it'll be different than the original and start off much earlier than the first version. Anyhow don't hate me for taking down "Pinkie Pie's Obsession" I just felt it wasn't the best story I could produce. Anyhow please stay tune for "Pinkie Pie's Obsession" and for "Fluttercrinkle"! ~Oliver-England
I personally think it would work better if Twilight, Applejack, and Rainbow Dash didn't just up and ditch Ponyville for no reason. Perhaps expand the time frame to years and years down the road.