Hello, those of you who still bother to listen. After many long months of scrupulous and thorough review, I have finally finished with a prologue I can be proud of. Now that I have the beginning, I can start on the middle, and eventually, the end. Thank you all for continuing on with me, especially after all the complications procrastinating. Hopefully you plan to stick around a bit longer
Here's the review I got back from PonyChan's Training Grounds.
Yeah, this isn't much of a bite to back up the bark. Let's just go with I was fairly lenient about the whole thing.
Just at first sight, your chapters are extremely short, which means you are probably pacing them too fast and just telling a lot. Either that or cutting them off before they should be. But we'll see.
Well... It's taken a bit longer than a week, but I am finally drawing near the end of my massive editing spree of Into Darkness (You might as well call it a rewrite)
Thanks to some help from benxlabs, (Who, might I add, has been a real lifesaver these past weeks) I've been able to bring you the 'remastered' edition of Into Darkness. I've taken the liberty of including a change-log below:
That's right; your favorite writer is going for the big leagues. I will soon be submitting my story, Into Darkness, to the mercurial proof-readers of Equestria Daily. In preparation for this momentous occasion, I will be going back over each chapter to zap from existence EVERY SINGLE INDIVIDUAL ERROR from the story that I missed due to a lack of proofreaders (my bad). Expect relatively small
You Betcha! I've crossed everything I can cross, including my fingers, hands, arms, toes, feet, legs, eyes, and unfortunately, my mom.