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Golden Hoof


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  • 594 weeks
    Back in the Saddle

    Hello, those of you who still bother to listen. After many long months of scrupulous and thorough review, I have finally finished with a prologue I can be proud of. Now that I have the beginning, I can start on the middle, and eventually, the end. Thank you all for continuing on with me, especially after all the complications procrastinating. Hopefully you plan to stick around a bit longer

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  • 622 weeks
    Ouch... My self esteem

    Here's the review I got back from PonyChan's Training Grounds.

    Yeah, this isn't much of a bite to back up the bark. Let's just go with I was fairly lenient about the whole thing.

    Just at first sight, your chapters are extremely short, which means you are probably pacing them too fast and just telling a lot. Either that or cutting them off before they should be. But we'll see.

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  • 625 weeks
    It's away!

    Keep your hooves crossed...

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  • 626 weeks
    Editing Checklist


    Well... It's taken a bit longer than a week, but I am finally drawing near the end of my massive editing spree of Into Darkness (You might as well call it a rewrite)

    Thanks to some help from benxlabs, (Who, might I add, has been a real lifesaver these past weeks) I've been able to bring you the 'remastered' edition of Into Darkness. I've taken the liberty of including a change-log below:

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  • 630 weeks
    EQD-Bound

    That's right; your favorite writer is going for the big leagues. I will soon be submitting my story, Into Darkness, to the mercurial proof-readers of Equestria Daily. In preparation for this momentous occasion, I will be going back over each chapter to zap from existence EVERY SINGLE INDIVIDUAL ERROR from the story that I missed due to a lack of proofreaders (my bad). Expect relatively small

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Mar
28th
2012

EQD-Bound · 3:21am Mar 28th, 2012

That's right; your favorite writer is going for the big leagues. I will soon be submitting my story, Into Darkness, to the mercurial proof-readers of Equestria Daily. In preparation for this momentous occasion, I will be going back over each chapter to zap from existence EVERY SINGLE INDIVIDUAL ERROR from the story that I missed due to a lack of proofreaders (my bad). Expect relatively small changes to the story; just fixing up all the grammatical errors that I am now completely embarrassed about. (Having just skimmed over my already revised prologue ;-;) If anypony out there is willing to offer a hoof and help me out with a chapter or two, I would be happy to accept it.

I cannot begin to tell you how much it would mean to me to be posted on Equestria Daily. Even if in the end it does terribly, it still managed to get through the tight standards that make that site what it is. I will still try and work on the latest chapter of the story, but my main focus for the next week will be on revision and improvement, so sorry about the delayed chapter update guys.

Anyway, that's about all I have for you right now. Keep looking forward to those updates, and thanks for watching!

~Golden Hoof

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Comments ( 1 )

Great news, I hope to see your story there very soon!

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