I am going to start a new story, and I know I haven't finished one yet... I am going to need extra help on those stories, but in the meantime, a new story it will be!!
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As the story opens, Bedalia Flametail, the novel's lead character, discovers that she is running from Princess Celestia's wrath to save herself from harm's way. Bedalia Flametail feels as if the world has been turned upside down and is fearful, but determined.
I'm wondering if I should continue the short story snippet with Flutters and Dashie turning back into fillies when Twilight's spell backfires... What do you guys think about that? I want an honest opinion.
Another day in Ponyville; the critters were all about and the birds were singing a sweet melody. Fluttershy walked to the market place to buy some food for her adored bunny Angel. Her soft, yellow fur and beautiful long pink hair gently blew in the cool, spring breeze. Her soft blue eyes were fixed on a pair of doves that seemed to kiss each other. As she entered the market place, a soft smile
I'm wondering if I should continue the short story snippet with Flutters and Dashie turning back into fillies when Twilight's spell backfires... What do you guys think about that? I want an honest opinion.
I really like it my dear. Probably not the most original story, but it is still the way how someone writes it to make in unique.
1492663 Thanks for your honesty I really appreciate it.