Chapter 1, off for a while. · 9:20pm Apr 23rd, 2012
Need to bring the nerfbat to good ol' North.
Will probably be back up in a few days.
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"You ready for a beating, friend?" I asked with a crooked smile.
North looked at me with a flat stare. "It's your own fault for making me so OP... Why should I be beaten for your incompetence, eh?"
I just shrugged. "Cuz I'm not big on self-inflicted punishment," I replied airly before taking a step forward. "Now bend over..."
Night and insight go hand in hoof, or something: chapter two also goes down for some nerfbattin'.
Aaaaand chapter six needs a couple changes in the dialogue section to be coherent with the changes I have in mind.