Oct
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2013
Oh really? · 3:59pm Oct 27th, 2013
Yep, after some debate and re-writes on the "Semper Paratus" story outline (that isn't published yet) I decided to add the tag "Pony on earth" to the story. Say what?!
I probably jumped the gun on adding that tag but I think the readers will be pleased with the intended twists that justify said tag.
Other story news- I've found that voice recording animated scenes for the chapters has really helped me relay a specific feeling at the time when I don't have a memo pad and pen handy. I can be riding my bicycle and talking through a scene and save it on my phone to type out later. Great idea! Unless those you pass by look at you as if you are crazy for talking to yourself...
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At least I'm not the only one who talks to themselves. I'm interested to see where you go with this new tag. Guess I'll have to wait and find out.
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Ya know, at first I really wanted to keep things Equestria bound, but the more I thought about it- the more it started to make sense. The question of "who" makes the "Pony on Earth" tag work makes me chuckle. Will readers see this coming? Or will it be an 'egg hunt'? All my eggs are painted camo if anyone is wondering...
1458388 I like camo. I was thinking you would make the story somewhat short considering the main character (who's name escapes my mind, plus I'm too lazy to click the mouse a few times to find out) is only supposed to be on 'vacation' for a week. I assume that the new tag will also somewhat extend the story.
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You are right Blaze, the story will conclude in seven "story days"... what I'm toying with is whether or not to cliff-hang the crap out of it and make it two stories OR end the original outline and tack on a few extra chapters at the end so the readers aren't chewing on their keyboards wondering what happened. Hehe.
The new tag was an after thought of how to end the story, or does it end there? (can't give that away!
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Depending on the mood I'd be in while ending it, I'd cliff hang the hell out of it just to see how pissed off people would get. That would be my immature side.
What would without a bout happen in the end: My more mature side would take over right at the end and I'd 'see the errors in my ways' and I'd get confuzzled (that's right) and everything would go to shit. Yes, I said confuzzled. Yes, I'm rambling. Why? Why would you assume I would know? I don't know. Am I going crazy? I think I'm going crazy.
Imma go sit in a corner and think about my life.