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Eyes in the Dark


I'm a writer but not normally of FanFic and I'm a certified rescue diver. Hunting and camping are among my favorite past-times while 4x4ing and rock climbing are more current.

Apr
14th
2014

...In review · 12:12am Apr 14th, 2014

Firstly, allow me to say thanks to everyone who has been beating down my figurative door asking... demanding- darn near pleading with me to get my ass-embly in gear and post another chapter of Semper Paratus. Ta-da! No, it's not posted yet so don't go looking. It's on the editor table currently and will be viewable post haste.

Oh, the "thanks to everyone" bit- that's for your patience too! Believe me, I want to write this story (and finish it) as much as you want to read it...

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Nov
19th
2013

The next big thing · 3:25pm Nov 19th, 2013

Unfortunately due to circumstances beyond (and within) my control, the next chapter is delayed slightly. I have been writing it but I've found myself writing two chapters in tandem this time. Had I been focused on only one, it would have been done by now- but my outline has changed because of some reader input. I took the advice of a non-FiM reader to alter a part in a future chapter and it must be setup properly starting... well, now.

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Oct
27th
2013

Oh really? · 3:59pm Oct 27th, 2013

Yep, after some debate and re-writes on the "Semper Paratus" story outline (that isn't published yet) I decided to add the tag "Pony on earth" to the story. Say what?!

I probably jumped the gun on adding that tag but I think the readers will be pleased with the intended twists that justify said tag.

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Oct
15th
2013

Edits are tuff! · 1:30am Oct 15th, 2013

Finally! The long awaited chapter 4 involving one spirit of chaos, the 'mane 6' and human is complete. Good grief this chapter ran long and I had to spend nearly an entire DAY just trying to end the darn thing. I'd get within a couple sentences and think I was done- aannnnddd, nope. Another couple pages later...

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Oct
7th
2013

Pressing buttons · 3:14pm Oct 7th, 2013

I realized something this past weekend as I wrote/read a little, I never put "Semper Paratus" up in the HiE group. I'm sitting here wondering if I should do it or not... I'm guessing that will mean a wider audience will actually see the story since now its just floating in limbo FiM space. Hmm, I think I'll do one more solid edit/review of the published chapters before hitting 'that' button.

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Sep
24th
2013

Discord's dyslexic debacle · 2:15am Sep 24th, 2013

So what I 'thought' was going to be a super easy chapter to write when I introduced Discord has turned out to be as challenging as those chapters involving a certain rhyming zebra! Trying to keep Discord's interactions fresh and believeable has been a nightmare. I'd get stuck working a scene and notice it didn't feel natural at all, scrap it and save the outline, and try again. Almost wrote in Rainbow getting into a fight but ended up deleting it because it wouldn't have flowed very well later

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Sep
17th
2013

Tacky jokes and whatnots · 6:52pm Sep 17th, 2013

So I was kicking around some ideas for jokes to use in the Discord/awesomeness chapter of the story and came up with one but I can't use it! The characters wouldn't get the reference because its not implied...

*So a cow walks into a pony bar, and the bar tender asks "hey cow, why aren't you going to that cow bar down the street?"
The cow turns to the tender and says "no Moo friends, no Moo friends..."

See, it only works IF you know the song by Drake...

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Sep
7th
2013

Tah-dah! · 10:32pm Sep 7th, 2013

Oh boy, once you read Chapter 3 of "Semper Paratus" you'll know their are some shenanigans ahead! Chapter 4 is gonna be fun to write and just in time too, I was getting burned out on Zecora's rhyming...

Hope you, the readers, enjoy this carefully measured chapter of the story- it's like catching that prize fish! You know its in the water and is just waiting for you to relax and then WHAMMO!

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Aug
21st
2013

Breathing easy · 1:39am Aug 21st, 2013

Yup, chapter 2 of Semper Paratus has been published out. Enjoy you readers so eager to read the next chapter! I've got a good start on chapter 3 and even outlined (possibly) the rest of this story... but don't get all crazy on me. I've been working late hours to get all these thoughts on paper as it were so if the chapters don't get posted as quickly from here on out- no hate mail please!

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Aug
13th
2013

A tongue tied couplet · 3:24am Aug 13th, 2013

So Semper Paratus (next chapter awaiting) is bogged down in some dialogue with Zecora. This HAS to be the most challenging part of the story! I think I will use interactions with Zecora sparingly hence forth. It's taking waaaay too long to get the sentences just right and one little slip up makes it seem awkward or hurried. Can't have 'that' now can we?

While progress is slow, it is still moving forward. Dunno if I should set another date for a 'maybe' chapter post or just wait it out...hmm.

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