EqD...

I'm not even going to begin wasting my time trying to fix what isn't broken. Maybe except for the grammar and archaic English (it was my first time using it, what do they expect?). And the story was Written in the Stars.

Reasons for rejection:
-Indents should be tabs, not spaces
-Typos
-OC needs introduction: Dusty, but his presense isn't explained until much later in the story, so it's confusing
-Misuse of archaic English
-Narrative voice doesn't sound like Scootaloo
-Telly language
-Its vs it's

I mean, you guys liked the story, right? That should be more than enough.

Stay gourd, my friends.

Comments

[Theta]

A lot of critics at EqD have their heads in their asses. Don't let this discourage you, even the best are rejected from that hellhole.

[Unknown Quillist]

1382858

Ain't it the truth? This is why I like FiMFiction, even with it's fucked-up Feature Box system.

[Theta]

1382861 Yessir. Much rather be able to post shitty stories willy-nilly, than have a great work of literature be turned down because the critic just didn't like it. They don't say that, but it's implied.

[Unknown Quillist]

1382864

We all know it's true. To be honest, I think they're not even consider other people's opinions and just their own. Bunch of fuckasses wouldn't known great fan-fiction if it came and nipped them right in the place where the sun don't shine...

[Theta]

1382867 Pretty sure the sun don't shine on them at all. What with them secluded and never leaving the sanctity of their nests and whatnot.

[Unknown Quillist]

1382876

I wouldn't be surprised. I also wouldn't be surprised if over half of them don't even write fan-fiction to begin with.

[Phoenix Quill]

Dude, I know how you feel, I just got my rejection letter today for one of my stories.
In fact, all of my stories had been rejected EXCEPT for Through Storm and Snow. That's right, even Discord Writes A Ship Fic.

And that's only because I caught them at the end of 2011, before they had a 3 strikes rule, before they gave a crap about how perfect everything had to be. Back when they posted, well... Damn near anything.

Secretly, I'm going to update that story, but instead of having it sent in on the google docs like before, I'll send them my fimfic.