We'll, this is quite an awkward situation... · 2:24am Sep 14th, 2013
Within fifteen minutes I get 23 dislikes and 17 views. I can only conclude that perhaps no one really likes one direction.
If that is the only reason to dislike a story, then I am beyond appalled.
I am looking for constructive criticism. If you dislike it, tell me WHY. Was my paragraph indentation bad? Did I not delve into the characters enough? I'm not mad, but rather ashamed that readers can not take a story idea into consideration. This was something I typed up because I thought it was INTERESTING. Not to troll, not because I'm a fan, but I wondered what would happen if a human celebrity got stuck in the MLP universe. Would you rather it be Justin Bieber? Michael Jackson? Lauren Faust herself?
I want conducive criticism. Not a bunch of dislikes.
Sorry for the rant, but seriously guys.... Grow up a little bit.
YOU! TELL US WHY U PUT DIS STORY IN?! TELL US AND WE STAHP BOTHERING U!
I said it on your story, I had no intention of reading it.
Then things got bad. So I decided to read it simply so there was at least one person in the comments who'd read it and could say whether it was bad or because One Direction.
And seriously? Other than how you did your paragraphs (inconsistent indenting, not breaking them up sometimes, etc.), there's nothing wrong with your story. I didn't see any glaring spelling mistakes, no constant problems with grammar (though my grasp of grammar is somewhat tenuous at times) and if it was about five random OC's rather than One Direction, there wouldn't be anywhere near this amount of hate.
INSTA NOPE
I didn't dislike your story but I wouldn't touch it with a 10' pole.
I'm sorry, but insta nope.
INSTA NOPE
Sorry to hear about what happened. Honestly, the content itself wasn't that bad. The characters ought to be expanded so they don't seem like clones or the same, but other than that, it was okay. The writing was by no means atrocious, and with the views and likes/dislike videos, it's obvious some people are judgmental jerks, so I'm sorry you were tossed into the line of fire.
If anything, make a great story out of this, as a way to flip off the haters. I myself don't like the group, but I won't dislike a story solely because of that.
Nobody's first story does well. You just have to stick with it and continue to the next.