Problems and edits.

I will be editing the last chapter for Ex Omnium Sententia so that I don't fuck myself up as I try to improve my clop writings, which I'm steadily improving with help from my friends. I feel as though I should edit the story, then post the chapter in sync with the edited chapter. I feel as though I'm pressing the first clop scene too quickly and for that I'm going to lose followers, favorites, likes, and have hate comments thrown at me from every direction because of pushing clop out so quickly in a story when I should be focusing on other problems, such as relationship problems, or problems that Daniel can deal with in his War Pig mercenary armor, like a manticore or timberwolf attack. Maybe friendship problems and that he has to deal with spending a day with his friends to improve his relationship with them because of him being pulled away so many times and being gone for so long.