Aug
22nd
2013
Failure · 9:01pm Aug 22nd, 2013
Yeah, so did you guys see the new story I published? Did you see how bad it was? Well, if not then don't bother with this. If you did, then I want to say that I seriously messed up on that one. I mean, there were all kinds of errors, the biggest being that I didn't put enough emotion into the characters. I really wish that I would have saved it for later instead of making it a quick write. The idea I had was (in my opinion) good, but I didn't give it a good beginning. It was so bad that I actually had to revoke the story. I'm working on it now, so if you read it before you may want to read it again when I'm done.
I saw it listed, but I didn't get a chance to read it.
I do look forward to the new version when you get it ready. 
1301955 I just hope that you like it, this time I'm actually paying attention.
*lick*
1301961
So weird how that one word just brightened my day
1301966
ever heard the phase shoot the engineer?
means they keep changing it because they can't get it how they like
post it, lick it and send it, so i can read it hehe
1301975 I've already modified it just a little, do you want me to stop and let you have a look at how it as at the moment?
1301978
if you'd like me to, i wouldn't mind taking a look
1301959 I'm sure it'll be good.
Once you get it done, I can slip a copy over to Fred2266 who does story reading of pretty much everything I've written.
1301982 Okay, but first I have a question. Since the story isn't submitted right now, how do view the story? I'm kinda blank on those details, I've never really let someone read a story that isn't published.
1301991 I could use as much advice as I could get. Then again, I guess all writers do.
1301992
you set a password in the story settings and anyone with the password can read it if they have a link, so long as you didn't remo ve the story or password i can read it
1301994 Mhmm, well Fred does reading of my stuff for Youtube.