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I'm working on the Madame Marelevolence sequel, and I'm having a hard time with it. I think I'm missing that adrenaline rush that came with the first story being built on a bet that I couldn't get into the featured list with a story written in a day. Which I then did:

I think I need a deadline, or a challenge to get myself going. Must...find...something...

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[Sirius_Face]

I don't know if this helps or matters to you, but your story prompted me to make my own story on the news of power ponies coming in season 4. That kind of thing is totally my favorite fetish, and then you came and wrote Brothel and painted this amazing image of a Madame Marevolent - I pretty much had to write my own take on power ponies. Though my story is a lot darker in clop than yours, and features Twilight's superhero character, your story gets a nod of acknowledgement in what I'm writing.

So, thank you for contributing to my inspiration. Here's a bit of what I'm writing. It's just the first draft, more towards the end of my story. I bet I could get it cleaned up, published, and featured before your sequel. I'd be willing to bet on it too:

“Guess who just made the leader of the power ponies into a sobbing orgasmic mess?” Tarnished Silver laughed as she called out into the dark office of the refurbished barn. She was so eager to report back to Blood Diamond that she hadn’t bothered to question why the room was so pitch dark inside. She never got the chance to wonder before something soft coiled around her throat with the quickness of a snake’s bite. The shock caught Tarnished Silver completely off guard, preventing her from putting up any fight as warm strands of silk weaved through her legs, binding them tight and making the mare lose her balance. Silver didn’t get to spend much time on the floor before she was lifted up effortlessly, hanging upside as the darkness in the room retracted.

Tarnished Silver wanted to scream as the darkness in the room slithered back to the center of the office, where a single large mare sat behind Blood Diamond’s desk. The darkness waved eagerly on the walls, floor, and ceiling of the room as it retracted back to the mare, revealing itself to be the living inky mane of the most dangerous super villain in Maretropolis: Madame Marelevolent.

“Now aren’t you just a lovely creature,” Madame’s voice purred as her mane turned Tarnished Silver around, allowing for a better look of the pony. “And so accomplished. I’ll hazard a guess and say it was you who made the leader of the power ponies into... how did you say? A sobbing, orgasmic mess?” The large mare laughed, letting the mental image of that statement play out in her mind, wondering if it was half as wonderful as the real thing. “Delicious. Quite the accomplishment indeed. No wonder your accomplice set up that curious auction for Masked Matter-Horn’s secret identity. It was lucky that I was close by when I heard about it, and that you were so conveniently close when I backtracked the online post to this location.”

[Plotpony]

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Oh my~

Well I've never been an inspiration before. I quite like what you're coming up with

Alright, how about we make this interesting, first one to publish two chapters, and make it into the featured list owes the other a clopstory request. Think you can handle it?

[Sirius_Face]

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Hmmm...
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[Plotpony]

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THE GAME IS AFOOT

RULES OF ENGAGEMENT

1. Two completed chapters must be published before the featured spot counts

2. Featured spot must be screenshoted and send to oponent to claim prize.

3. Stories must be out within the next two weeks ending on 24th of August

4. Requests won must be 2k words or more.
Are these terms acceptable?

[Sirius_Face]

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I'll agree to those terms. My story is only going to be two chapters anyways, so it's all good for me.

Just so we're clear, the winner is the person who gets their two chapters published and on the feature board. We have to hit the feature board first to win. There's no worry about word count, just two final draft, edited, published chapters.

This should be fun. Either way I win, cause I totally want to read what you come up with.

[Plotpony]

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Indeed, thems the rules

Onwards~ Good luck my opponent.

[Sirius_Face]

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You too! Though I'll be a little pissed if I wake up tomorrow and see you've already won. I already know you're fast as it is.

[Plotpony]

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Well you have given me the challenge I needed, though I've hardly started really, so you've got a headstart. I wouldn't worry too much....

[Benny]

Actually, either way I win. I get to read both stories for free