Twilight Wanderer - Act II Updated · 10:29am Aug 7th, 2013
Lots of changes here, especially to the reindeer kingdom section. Twilight spends a few hours, and likely several pages instead of a few paragraphs, with the reindeer now.
This one took a while to update since I was adding a ton of content and thinking up the lore and stuff for the reindeer. I think I ended up almost doubling the word count on it. When I originally wrote this story I had it split up into 'acts' like you see in Diablo as a little reference to that, so I guess a longer chapter, or act in this case, isn't necessarily a bad thing.
I added a few paragraphs for when Twilight first arrives at Evergreen Citadel. The description I came up for it is sort of what I envisioned back when I first thought about it. I tend to visualize a lot of the things as I write (sometimes I even go over dialogue with myself in whispered tones if no one is around to get the feel of the scene going down).
I haven't done too much with last section of the chapter after Silver Shock is introduced. I provided a description for her and made a few alterations, but no major re-working like the reindeer section got, yet.
I'm kind of partial to Silver Shock, so I tried to make an illustration for her. My knowledge and ability to use my paint shop program has apparently been evaporating, as it was kind of a pain to do. She was supposed to be sitting at a table in the cider tavern (I even looked up Hearth's Warming Eve screenshots to try and simulate the interior, since the building is meant to be from that era) but I kept running into problems and just went with her and her book. She was the important part anyway.