Snags In the OTSB Plotline Explained... · 10:36am Aug 6th, 2013
While listening to the "Victory Theme" I have planned for the final mission Alexys flies in the story, I began to think about what I did wrong with the short introduction of Spitfire. Yes, I believe the small frame of exposure to the readers is something that I need to fix. But I want your guy's opinion on this too. Should I take a week to fix up the first two chapters, or should I leave it for now until we get deeper into the story line?
Option B may sound good to you guys, but let me tell you a little more about Option A. Although it might prohibit the posting of the next couple of chapters I had started planning, it would allow me to give a proper introduction to who Alexys is, as well as give you guys some background on how Spitfire got there in the first place. Also, it would allow me to correct the mistakes that I see with Shamrock now that I've taken the time to read through my own chapters. (Gosh I could really use someone who knows about Ace Combat 6 and can help me edit and such...)
Well, what do you guys think is the best course of action? Option A or Option B?
I think I need to get AoC6...
Fortunately, it was offered for the 360. Today, I shall go look for that game. If I can find it, I shall be much better able to assist you with these difficulties
1266111
Oh boy~