Revisions for A Novel Tale are now live! · 12:31pm Jul 19th, 2013
You might notice a bit of an increase in word count in some of the earlier chapters. That's because revisions are now posted!
The revisions go all the way up to chapter 8, but all the major changes are in the earlier chapters. Specifically, chapters 2, 3, and 4.
Chapter 2 has a brand new scene where we actually get to see Twilight introduce Novel to Dash, and Dash's subsequent reaction. In Chapter 3, AJ is now a lot more talkative then before. and in Chapter 4, the argument between Twilight and Dash about visiting the hive has been changed a bit.
all other chapters received much more minor changes. Stuff like added/enchanced descriptions, word choices, and such. The only other real notable change was in chapter 6, where the paragraph describing the central chamber of the hive was reworked slightly to hopefully paint a clearer picture.
Now, I'm not saying that you have to go and reread A Novel Tale right now... but if you've been getting a hankering to do so, now's a good time to do it!
Oh, and expect chapter 12 to be out at the start of next week!
Yay! I like re-reading things!
Grazie per l'informazione.