off to a good start

My second attempt at writing a story is finally up. I finally found a viewpoint to the story I've been working on that feels right. Not only have I changed the point of view to my story to that of a character I like much better, I have enlisted the help of Gamma to be my editor!

So, the few out there who read my initial attempt, "Remembrance", will find this familiar. I also think you will find "Burned Feathers" more enjoyable, as I had enjoyed writing it much more!

Comments

[Gamma Deekay]

*He means familiar because it's in the same section of the wasteland and might have some recurring characters, not that it's the same story.