Thanks to those that helped me along the way...

I dedicate this post to the few people I like to call friends on this site. While I take my time and use others works to improve on my own work, I get advice from other writers to help me along the way. I like reading, it's one of my favorite things to do, so when I came across this site, I was in metaphorical heaven. I found out one of my real life friends was a regular on this site, I.E. posts stories and updates to those stories. While I read and took notes on the way most stories are written, mostly just the general format, while I get the more advanced writing tips from my friend, Shaq_of_All_Trades, so I took all that I learned and put it into my first story. So far, my story is doing great, and it's not mindless clop, even better. Shoutout to Shaq for keeping his head while I write random bullshit and he sifts through it to find the good shit.